Monday, February 28, 2011

Trial and Error


1.                 Captive

 “Look at me.”
I focused on Aiden’s worried blue eyes and tried to drown out the sounds of death and violence that had filled the house.
“Lyss has is hurt.” Their blood bond made it so he could feel when she was in pain. “This is your only chance.”
I wasn’t sure what he meant at first and then it hit me. He was telling me to escape. I’d tried once before, after Elyssa caught me lighting a candle with magic and had Jeremiah break my fingers and toes then healed me and broke them again and again all night. I hadn’t even been able to get out the front door and Elyssa made Jeremiah spend an entire week punishing me for it. The memory of the awful pain and torture that just attempting to run away had caused me was enough to make me nauseous.
I shook my head and tried to stand a little bit taller, “No. I’m not leaving, she’ll just find me and things will be worse. Besides you cannot let me leave, you are bound to keep me here.”
He frowned down at me, worry causing crinkles to form around the corners of his eyes. “I can’t keep you here if I’m busy fighting for my life. As soon as they come in here looking for a fight I want you to shift and jump out the window. The sun is already up and it would be painful for anyone to try to follow you so even if they did they wouldn’t get far. I want you to run as fast as you can and don’t stop until you can absolutely not run anymore.”
“But she’ll just find me, you know she will.”
“Maybe, but this wolf pack was strong enough to weaken her, they might even have a shot at killing her. So if you follow their tracks and find their home you might be safe there. But you have to try.
My eyes welled with tears, he was right this was my only chance, but the thought of leaving the only friend I have in the world made my heart feel like it was splitting apart. Needing the comfort of his arms I buried myself in his chest and cried. “She’ll kill you when she finds out what you did,” I cried into his shirt.
“Shh,” he rubbed my back with one hand as he held me tightly with the other. “Don’t think of that, I’ve lived my life and now I want you to have a chance at yours.” He pulled away from me slowly and pulled my head up. My face was wet with tears that wouldn’t stop flowing. Aiden is all I have, my one friend in this entire world. “You’re going to have to shift if you want any chance of making it.” My eyes widened. He couldn’t be serious. I haven’t shifted since I was a kid, since before she kidnapped me I’m not sure if I can anymore. He must have seen the worry in my eyes because he continued, “The wolf pack isn’t from around here, the scouts confirmed that the wolf Lyss took was a lone wolf, without a pack and there aren’t any packs in Portland, or Oregon and there’s no way you’ll be able to travel another state or more away on foot in human form.”
“Then I can’t,” I shook my head. “I can’t go.”
Aiden’s jaw clenched and the worry lines around his eyes become more defined. “You’re going and that’s final,” I opened my mouth to object but the look in his eyes made me stop.
“I’ll try,” I sniffed and wiped the remaining tears away. “But I haven’t – ”
He raised up his hand to silence me and turned around to face the door, “I don’t want to hear any excuses, this will be your only chance, don’t waste it.” With a cracking sound two wolves, both dark grey, crashed through my bedroom door, teeth bared, growling at Aiden. He must have heard them coming, that was why he turned toward the door, so he could face them when they came in. “Don’t waste it,” he said again without turning around.





Sunday, February 27, 2011

Rethinking/ Brainstorming

Okay after talking to Jess I've decided to retry my old idea of wolf, horse, and raven and some of my old thoughts about their abilities.

Lexi- (Amanda Bynes):  Empath, black wolf, magic
Starrla- (Hayley Williams): influence and travel through dreams, black horse, magic
Dahlia- (Olivia Wilde): Can sense when a person is about to die, black raven, magic

Also, Starrla was kidnapped by Elyssa when she was seven.

Saturday, February 26, 2011

A Fantasy - Sara Teasdale

Brainstorming

Starrla Brainstorming:

 

Starrla, Dahlia, and Lexi all shapeshift into wolves and in wolf form can read each other’s minds.
Dahlia and Lexi are both more dominant than Starrla and struggle over who should lead.
Lexi- (Amanda Bynes): Can see into dreams,can perform magic, shapeshift into a grey wolf.
Starrla- (Hayley Williams): Can travel through dreams, can perform magic, shapeshifts into a black wolf.
Dahlia- (Olivia Wilde): Can spin dreams, can perform magic, shape shifts into a snow white wolf.
Gabriel Gunning – (James Mcavoy): A young vampire and uncle of Dahlia. He and his half sister Cashlyn Gunning are very close and when he was dying of skin cancer Cashlyn called in a favor from a vampire whose life she saved from other werewolves. The vampire Vincent de Luca turned Gabriel into a vampire and released him from his blood bond.
Blood Bond: A vampire is bound to his sire by the very blood that change him/her into a vampire until their sire or master releases them by letting the vampire drink every drop of their sire’s blood and then feeding their sire their blood. This relinquishes the vampire from the blood bond. Vampires who are blood bond cannot disobey their sire no matter how much they may wish to, they also can never hide from their sire because the bond will always lead the sire to them.
Aiden Connor: Vampire blood bond to Elyssa and Starrla’s only vampire confidant. Starrla reminds him of his little sister who Elyssa murdered and he is fiercely protective of her.


Friday, February 18, 2011

OUTLINE!!!


Chapter One
Characters Present: Starrla, Nathanial, Gabriel, Evangeline & Andrew West
•    Werewolf attack > Meets Nathanial > Shapeshifts
•    Escapes following the scent of the wolves back to Shelton
•    Breaks into Gabriel’s house naked > Pastor’s House
•    Begins volunteering at the Community Meal
Chapter Two
•    Confrontation with werewolves > Nathanial (Chemistry) > Meets Dahlia
•    Awkwardness with Gabriel, needs his help with ID and Social Security Card
Chapter Three
•    Gabe is researching her past
•    Job with Gabriel  > Chemistry > Distrust > Old Fears Resurface
•    Meets Lexi at bar
•    Gabriel can’t find mom > fight > he promises to exhaust his last resource.
•    Lex + Star bond
Chapter Four
•    Moving in with Lexi
•    Dahlia visits bar tells Star her secret and wants to help her.
•    Lexi + Dahlia + Star bond over gifts GIRL TIME
Chapter Five
•    Two nights a week practice w/ Dahl + Lex + Star
•    Difficult Personalities begin to clash, Dahlia and Lex stop speaking
•    Stars loyalties begin to become conflicted and she must meet with Dahlia and Lex separately
Chapter Six
•    Tense at Lex’s > Not taking practice seriously > Old habits resurface
•    Star + Lex fight > Star is kicked out > Star moves in with Gabriel
Chapter Seven
•    Star not speaking to Lex > Practicing with Dahlia in Shelton
•    Self Defense with Gabriel
•    Nathanial isn’t dealing well with Star living with Gabriel
•    Self Defense with Nathaniel
•    Feeling torn between her loyalty to Gabriel for all his help and Nathaniel.
Chapter Eight
•    Nathanial and Star’s relationship is strained and reaches a breaking point > Star needs a friend she can talk to without bias
•    Star goes to Lex’s to check on her
•    Star and Lex make up > Star spends the night
•    Attacked by Jeremiah in the middle of the night.
Chapter Nine
•    Star promises to go quietly if they leave Lex alone, if not she’ll kill herself, Lyss agrees
•    Lyss sends Jeremiah after Lex
•    Starrla tries to fight Lyss with her gifts but Lyss drinks her blood, weakening her
Chapter Ten
•    Jeremiah never returns
•    Gabriel and Lex come to Star’s rescue
•    Gabriel is injured and unable to fight.
Chapter Eleven
•    Lex and Star work together to hold Lyss back from killing him
•    Lyss injures both Lex and Star and goes for Gabriel
•    Nathanial shows up and saves Gabriel by ripping off Lyss’s arm before she could finish cutting off his head.
•    The other wolves show up and Lyss who is injured and runs off and is pursued by wolves who do not catch her
•    Gabriel is in critical condition because he is not healing, Nathanial is wounded from when Lyss fought back after he ripped her arm off.
•    Starrla is worried that neither will make it.  She is unsure which one she loves.
Chapter Twelve
•    A man and woman show up out of nowhere and the woman begins healing both Gabriel as the man heals Nathanial with vampire blood.
•    Gabriel’s wounds appear on the woman’s body. The man then gives her his blood to drink and heal herself.
•    Nathanial kisses Starrla and apologizes for everything Gabriel gives her a look of mixed feelings.

Thursday, February 17, 2011

Once upon a time..

Once upon a time there was a girl who could write beautiful stories that everyone liked to read....I just wish she was me.